INTRODUCTION: this essay will talk about my birthday summer vacation, I will say things about it like how I felt during the different events in this story. Ok, hope you enjoy it.     

So when it was my birthday it was summer. I wanted to go and see animals and so we went to lion country safari. Once we got there we went straight to the bathroom because it was an hour drive and we really needed to go.  After we went to the bathroom, we went to go show the employees our tickets we got online from booking it on my dad’s phone. And so we drove in when the employee said: Ok just drive straight and enjoy your ride, and so here we are going to see some animals.

Alright, our first animal is a tortoise let’s see, uhh where are the tortoises, uh I guess they’re not here, ok now what’s next. Next were birds, lots of different birds. The birds had a waterfall, I thought that was cool.  Next were like deer with stripes, they were kind of cool. Next were ostriches, they were running around, some were in the deer with stripes habitat, and when we were in the ostriches habitat it was crazy as some were running around some were eating bugs from the ground and some were pooping, it was crazy. When we were driving to see our next animals I was thinking about the lions, I could not wait to see the lions.

Ok what are next, next were like deer with wavy horns they were weird but cool, when we were driving and seeing the deer with wavy horns the workers went to go feed those deer, he had a thing on the back of his truck and probably had a button in the car that dropped the food down to the ground. So what animal is next, the next animal were LIONS, YES LIONS, I was so happy to see if the lions went up to our car, I was super happy but the lions were in a cage so they couldn’t come up to the car, I was sad but at least I got to see a little lion cub sleeping with his mom, that made me happy again.

After that we went over a bridge I said wow those are some big rocks in the river, my brother said those are not rocks they are hippos. Wow, look one is opening his mouth my brother said: those teeth are huge. So after we saw the hippos we saw an island there was an endangered rhino species on the island, I really hoped that rhino species won’t be endangered any more. Next was more rhinos but this time they were not on a island they were going up to cars and eating grass, some had really big horns but one rhino wanted to check us out so the rhino came up to our car and the rhino was really close like really close, if I had a heart monitor to check how fast my heart was going it would say like 120 mph but that was really cool. And they had zebras chilling with the rhinos; I have never seen a zebra really close up.

So then we kept on driving straight to the next animal. The next animal was MONKEYSSS!!! They had multiple islands, they also had stuffed animals, a play ground, and toy balls, toy balls too!! Some monkeys had red butts; I liked the monkeys with red butts. lol And the last animal WAS, drum roll please, BUM BUM BUM, GIRAFFES! They couldn’t come up to the car but at least I got to see their very big necks. And so we went around again but this time we went back to the ostriches habitat when we were about to go out of the habitat the car in front of us stopped we don’t know why but then a ostrich went from where the people in front of us were and pecked at our window, my brother got out his phone and started filming it was crazy and after that we went around and then we left lion country safari to only come once again.

After all, how did you like the essay? I tried very hard to make it, and when I was writing it I wanted it to feel like I am talking to you in person, I also tried to elaborate as much as I could. I got very cool souvenirs and very cool memories as I hope you did to from this story. Over all, I felt happy to write this and for you to read it. I hope you liked this story, have a great day, bye.